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Stunning photograph. Really I love the perspective you created in this. I am not an expert at photography, but I am gonna give this critique a shot!!!

I really think your lighting is perfect here. You have the perfect amount of light reflecting on the 'blood' and also on the little bottle.

The only thing I wold change maybe it the surface underneath it all. I would like to maybe see something that would make the red pop more. Like a darker blue, or maybe a green.... But i am not sure. It's tricky cause you don't want the surface's color to be more dominant than the red, that would just defeat the whole purpose of the picture.

But yeah, I really love this picture!!!!

Please note that all opinions expressed in this critique are my own. Therefor take from it what you want and leave the rest behind.

I hope I was a bit helpfull atleast!!

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Leana
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Bergholtz Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2015  Professional General Artist
This is beautiful. The bottle looks very painterly. The compositon is very good and I really like the blue tint to the paper.
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ElindielForestStar Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Aw, thanks so much! :hug:
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Bonniemarie Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014   Traditional Artist
great i love the angle of the photo
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CarmenFoolHeart Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And just when I needed some spilt liquid... Really helpful! And I like how dynamic yet accidental this looks.
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ElindielForestStar Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Ah, thanks! That is what I was partially trying for. :hug:
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butterflysopia Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
it looks like blood
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chriseastmids Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
your wonderful work is featured here [link]
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ElindielForestStar Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you! :hug: :glomp:
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chriseastmids Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
my pleasure :D
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chriseastmids Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
great series ... i might well have to do something like this but i'll say i was inspired by your pictures ... now i know what to do with my black ink :D
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ElindielForestStar Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Ah, thanks! :) :hug:
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chriseastmids Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
your so very welcome thats a fact :D
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Kryseis-Art Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hello dear,

Your beautiful work is featured here : [link]
:huggle: :heart: :love:
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ElindielForestStar Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Ah, thank you! I appreciate it!
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Kryseis-Art Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome :love:
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Morphine-Cloud Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012
Featured : [link]
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ElindielForestStar Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you!
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rentunumber2 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
the red look like blood me and my bf like ur spilled paint pictures but this one the most
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ElindielForestStar Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:hug: Thank you! :)
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rentunumber2 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe yours welcome
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teken-lovers Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow it's beautiful!
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ElindielForestStar Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks :)
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oXoXanimeloverXoXo Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
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omg!!!
cool!!
i'm not an EMO nor a GOTH but i really like this shot


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ElindielForestStar Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:blush: I'm flattered you like it! Thank you. :)
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oXoXanimeloverXoXo Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
you're welcome :3
and thank you also :)
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ElindielForestStar Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
No problem. Welcome to Deviantart, by the way. I hope you enjoy it here. :)
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oXoXanimeloverXoXo Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
oh!
yes..!
i really enjoyed it here
although im a bit shy of my amateur drawings.....(i think it's an EYESORE to 'experts' here in deviantart)
that's why i'm SO HAPPY every time someone leaves a comment on my drawings/likes my drawings
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ElindielForestStar Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Well, practice really does help. I've seen improvement memes on here, and it is really startling to see the improvement that even really good artists made in a ten year span. That may seem like a long time :), but while practice may not make perfect, it can help you toward that. I'll check out your drawings when I have a chance.
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oXoXanimeloverXoXo Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
thanks :)

but i started drawing when i'm in grade 3
it's been 6 years
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